I'd like to see a story where the heroine's brain gets wiped and replaed by the mind of a villain.
Then the villain takes down several other heroines before she is finally stopped. Perhaps the villain could weaken the heroines using his powers, then absorbing their consciousness by kissing them - leaving their bodies in a coma
The story would end with the heroine's body being placed in stasis, then escaping - ending on a cliff hanger
I like the kiss idea, maybe they can do something along the lines of struggling and add inner dialogue that the villain is telepathically saying to them.
I like the mind wipe, I use it in my stories too especially with demon or alien themes. But I call it Soul Corruption, but it is the same thing. Basically wiping the slate clean and forming a new self.
If you ever want to work together on a story or script I'd join you.
What characters could you envision the best for this? What models do you like alot?
@Nightx1221 The inner dialogue could work really well, I was thinking the heroine might break the embrace a few times - giving the villain time to taunt them. Soul corrution is a much better way of describing brain wipe.
I hadn't really decided on characters yet, but I was leaning towards Supergirl and some other DC heroine.
@Swampy170 I was thinking on of the heroines could fight with the heroine-demon to distract her, while the other attacks her telepathically - finally locking her inside her own mind.
I like the soul corruption idea, and I like how different you are going with the use of inner dialogue and breaking the trance a few times. Actually, your ideas of demon villains and soul corruption were something I was playing around with in one of my scripts. I think you should flesh it out more, would be cool to see where it goes. Could spread the several women out in installments.